Selasa, 17 Maret 2009

hometown

I live in Surabaya, the second of the biggest city in Indonesia. This is the city where i was born. I like to live in surabaya even its very hot,about 38' celcius, very crowded, and flooded actually.But surabaya has many place where it is very beautiful. It has a beach, parks, and the most popular now are plazas. Surabaya now became one stop shopping, because surabaya has a lot of plaza. In every places, parts and side of surabaya there's a building of plazas.
When the night comes you will see the beautiful sides of surabaya. The city of lights were sparkling and hanging around in every side of surabaya on the streets.It looks very beautiful and amazing. On the center of the streets, there's a waterspray with the colorful lights showing to the transportations user who pass on around it. I think it's very beautiful. It's definitely makes me feel that i really live on the big town. That's why i love to live in surabaya, whether its on bad side or good side.
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5 komentar:

  1. Rulyana20 Maret 2009 pukul 21.27

    Well,,

    Why did you write just a paragraph?
    It should 2 paragraph, doesn't it?


    Hmm,, I would like give you comment about your assignment..
    I think that's good enough, But you just type it in one paragraph.


    I think, there are still some mistakes in your assignment..
    Ex:
    -Surabaya has many place where it is very beautiful...(It should "Surabaya has many places where they are very beautiful")
    - there's a building of plazas..(It should "there are....". cause It's plural).

    And you don't tell us what are the beautiful places in Surabaya? You just mention beach, parks, and plaza,but You didn't mention what;s name of it.


    I think that's all from my comment..

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  2. Ranti Putri Nastiti21 Maret 2009 pukul 18.57

    i think your paragraph is good .
    i suggest you to describe the interesting places in surabaya .
    and not just listing .
    so far your paragraph is good .
    give me comment too :)

    BalasHapus
  3. Damasti22 Maret 2009 pukul 06.37

    at first, thank you for your comment on my blogsite :)

    your paragraph is great!
    but you made some little mistakes in grammar.

    in the fourth line, it should be :
    Surabaya becomes one-stop shopping city now

    explain more, and it would be better than this.

    :)

    DAMASTI A
    120810185G

    BalasHapus
  4. cHuBbY_LuChUu23 Maret 2009 pukul 02.15

    I like your writing...
    it's good...

    but, you should can describe more specific again about your hometown,..

    commented by : elok

    BalasHapus
  5. Karina24 Maret 2009 pukul 04.12

    okaY friends!!!!!
    thanks for your all comment,, i will try to write more better...

    BalasHapus

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