My Favourite Movie
Harry Potter is one of my favourite movie. This movie becoming my favourite since it has been held on theatre eight years ago. In my opinion, the story is totally awesome. Based on the best seller novel by JK.Rowling, this movie becomes real. I mean that the story is fiction, but it looks real when we see the movie. This movie story tells about Harry Potter, he is a wizard child since he was a baby, but his parents died by the hand of The Dark wizard,Voldemort. So, he had to struggled on his whole life. When he turned to a young boy, Hogwart school of wizard and wizardry sent him a message that he is a student of that school. In there, he learned everything about magic, and also he found his true friendship, Hermione Granger and Ron Weasley. They always helped Harry Potter in everything, whether is right or wrong. They do this all together, happiness or sorrow. Harry Potter also learned how to love his parents, friends, teachers, and everything.
When Voldemort comes to kill Harry Potter, Harry against hard to be win. His bestfriend helped him until they comes to chaotic, but they still hold out. With his witchcraft power, his friends help, and their corageous, voldemort got lost.
From the story, i learn something about love, friendship, against everything bad, with our courageous and our heart and soul. That's why this movie becoming my favourite ever, because the story is touching, even it's just a fiction story. But it doesn't mind, because we get everything in this movie, the great adventure, and the philosophy of this movie, definitely Harry Potter is my favourite.
From the story, i learn something about love, friendship, against everything bad, with our courageous and our heart and soul. That's why this movie becoming my favourite ever, because the story is touching, even it's just a fiction story. But it doesn't mind, because we get everything in this movie, the great adventure, and the philosophy of this movie, definitely Harry Potter is my favourite.
I think your paragraph is good and simple...
BalasHapusBut you can edit subject with capital word
"From the story, i learn something about love,"
and I think you can write "8"
with eight..
ok?
Ok
HapusThis essay good
Hapusyour paragraph is good enough,..
BalasHapusI like your writing about harry potter,.
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I think your writing isn't focus,.
BalasHapusyour paragraph about harry potter!
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HapusThanks for your comment, guys...
BalasHapusMy paragraph has been changed...
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BalasHapusSo far,your paragraph is good enough...
Because you tell about HARRY POTTER with focus...
N so far your grammar is good enough too...
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hi karina..
BalasHapushmm.. your paragraph is good and interesting.. :)
you tell it more detail and the uses of your grammar is good..
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hii kar ..
BalasHapusi think your paragraph is good enough ..
you wrote very well ..
and i'm very interesting read your paragraph ..
you give good reason about this movie ..
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hi Iam Rudy......120810491G..
BalasHapusi think your paragraph is good enough even you made some mistake on your writing....
be careful on write a vocabulary,,,because it will be misunderstanding if you write on wrong vocab.....
And Once Again I LoVE HAry POteer..heheheh
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hi ..
BalasHapusi think your paragraph is good .
but you aren't focus ithink ..
keep in good writing ..
Ranti P. Nastiti
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That's my favorite movie too...
BalasHapusI agre with ur argumentation..
N I think no thing that has to dislike on this movie, right?
so far Ur argumentation is great...
hi karin, your topic same with me.
BalasHapusyour argument is focus, simple and easy to understand.
hy karina. . . . . .
BalasHapusi think your paragraph is good enough, and not too hard to understand. . .
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karina, you described a lot about Harry Potter, and you only gave your opinion very little..
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by DAMASTI AMANDARA
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hay karina...
BalasHapusi think your writing is very good and focus
easy to understand
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its really good
BalasHapusits really good
BalasHapusMe too, It is my favourite novel!
BalasHapusVery nice....
BalasHapusReally good
good
BalasHapusVery very helpful. I'm requesting to write about Harry Potter and The Deathly Hollows Part-2
BalasHapusI love your pharagraph
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