Minggu, 24 Mei 2009

Unforgettable Moment

My Unforgettable Moment


When I was 15 years old, I had experienced that unforgettable for me. It was happened in my house on the wednesday afternoon 4 years ago. As usual, I always doing my house activities everyday, one of them are taking the dry clothes

On a bright wednesday, I was taking the dry clothes at the upstairs of my house, on the balcony. Everything is okay at the moment, but there's a little bit problem here, there are some clothes that hook up on the roof of my house. So, I tried to put it on with the way that I did. Then, I went outside of my balcony fence and long pipe stick on my hand to take the clothes on my roof. At the first, I could take the clothe, and I had to take the other. I kept close and close with the clothe that hook on the roof. Suddenly,......I was slipped and fell down to the terrace of my house, with 4 meters high. After all, I felt hurt on whole part of my body. I could not breathe and I could not wake up by myself. There were a lot of dust on my body, broken woods, plywoods are everywhere, and also nails were embed on woods. Less than minute, my parents and my sister came quickly to me. They help me to stand up. They were tottaly shocked of me.

On the night, my parents took me to the clinic. They were afraid of my condition, maybe I got seriously injured after fell down. Fortunately, I wasn't on seriously injured. Thanks to God!!. I'm just got bruised on my head, and some scar on my hands and legs. This is unforgettable moment for me, that I'm still alive after that. But now I know and I felt that, how to be an actor who acting fell down. It will make a different sensation of it. But I willl never and never again experience like that. It will definitely hurt me, of course.





10 komentar:

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  2. i think your paragraph is good..

    you use simple word and that's easy to understand...

    so far so good to me.

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  3. wildania(120810477G)

    your paragraph and writing is good.
    and you use simple word!

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  4. hy karina. .
    i think your paragraph is good enough. .


    i cant find big mistake at your duty. .

    . . . . .Rico. . . . .

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  5. By : Yulia Primita Sari (120810494G)

    Hi Karina..............

    Thank you for your comment in my blog before.

    - I think your paragraph is so far so good.

    - About your grammar, it so fine I think.

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    he..he..

    Thanks for comment my blog,,
    I think your paragraph is good and you can write interesting story.
    And easy to understand..

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  7. Hy karina....

    I think your paragraph is good enough...
    And your grammar good enough....

    That's all

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  8. Wow, that's really unforgettable moment girl..

    u explained about ur story clearly,,

    But u still forget to check ur grammatical,.

    But so far ur writing is good,,and I hope u dont get an experience like that again,,hehehe...

    BalasHapus
  9. hay karina i think your paragraph is good

    and your grammar is good enough too

    you use many simple words and it make me understand your story

    BalasHapus
  10. hAi KArina,,
    Your PArgraph Is Good enough...
    i CAn Not Mistakes In Your PAragraph........

    Thanks...
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